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EDM Marketing | Our In-House Secrets to Writing Emails That Convert

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With an average return of US$10 – $36 for every $1 spent, email remains to be one of the most potent weapons in a digital marketer’s arsenal. Yet too often, it’s treated as little more than a quick blast to an entire mailing list then calling it a day. To better utilise email for growth, you must change how they’re written and delivered. That’s where electronic direct mail (EDM) marketing comes in.Ā 

Instead of sending one message indiscriminately to everyone in the mailing list, EDM takes a more nuanced approach to email marketing. Every email in an EDM campaign is crafted with the goal of being timely, relevant, and aligned with what the recipient needs, and delivered at the right moment. And it does this by leveraging a lot of data.Ā 

In this article, we’ll first discuss what EDM is and why it is completely different from email marketing. More importantly, we’ll discuss the psychological strategies we use to write emails that not only get opened, but also drive action.Ā 

What Is EDM Marketing?Ā 

Electronic Direct Mail is a campaign-based approach that aims to build a structured conversation with your audience rather than sending disjointed one-off emails.Ā 

It follows the same principle as traditional direct mail, where businesses collected customer addresses to build mailing lists and then sent catalogues, postcards, or coupons with the goal of nurturing relationships and driving repeat sales.Ā Ā 

What sets EDM apart is its extremely targeted nature. Instead of blasting the same message to everyone, EDM segments audiences by behaviour, preferences, and stage in the buyer’s journey, with automation ensuring that each message is delivered at the right time. Ā 

For example, one subscriber might receive a reminder about an abandoned cart, while another gets an onboarding guide. Someone at the beginning of their buying journey could be sent an educational blog to build awareness, while those in the decision-making phase will be sent a case study to aid their decision-making.Ā 

The neat part is that all these messages were triggered automatically by their actions or their input. This combination of data-driven segmentation and automation makes EDM campaigns not only more relevant, but also scalable and consistently effective.Ā 

EDM vs. Email MarketingĀ 

Email marketing is the broad field that covers any communication sent through email. It can include newsletters, seasonal promotions, or quick one-off announcements. While there is strategy involved, the most common approach is to send an email blast to the whole mailing list.Ā 

EDM marketing builds on these, but its strategy extends beyond the inbox. Campaigns are reinforced with retargeting ads, social media posts, and even text messages, so that it resembles a conversion funnel rather than a series of isolated sends.Ā Ā 

EDM vs. Email Marketing Comparison

 

Moreover, modern EDM platforms make it possible to automate journeys,Ā personalise messages at scale,Ā and integrate with other marketing channels. Ā 

For example, if a subscriber clicks on a product link but does not complete a purchase, they may receive a reminder email the following day or see a retargeting ad for the same product. If a customer engages with educational content, the next campaign might position them for a product demo or special offer.Ā 

How To Create EDM Content That Converts Using PsychologyĀ 

Since every piece of content in an EDM campaign serves a distinct purpose, knowing how to frame the message is just as important as deciding when to send it. A teaser email should spark curiosity, a reminder should create urgency, and a thank-you should build goodwill. This is where psychology comes in. By understanding how people pay attention, process information, and make decisions, your emails will perform better.Ā 

Cognitive Load and Attention Span

Cognitive load refers to the mental effort required to process information, and our brains have limited capacity. When an email tries to say too much at once, the reader’s attention can flatline.Ā Ā 

Keep EDM Marketing content simple

In a world of short attention spans, simpler is better. Concise, well-organised emails are more likely to be read and understood. This means using simple language and focusing on one main message or goal per email. Visually, you should break up text with headings or bullet points and leave breathing room between elements so it’s easy on the eyes.Ā Ā 

Visual PrimingĀ 

Visual priming involves using imagery or design elements to trigger certain feelings or associations in your reader’s mind.Ā Ā 

Visual priming example for EDM marketing

Image from reallygoodemails.com

Ever noticed how Airbnb’s emails frequently showcase gorgeous photos of destination homes? One glance and you’re daydreaming about that cozy cottage or beachside villa. You are now primed to desire the experience, which makes you more receptive to the message that follows.Ā Ā 

Emotional ResonanceĀ 

Emotional resonance is about creating a feeling that sticks with your audience. People may forget the details of your offer, but they won’t forget how it made them feel. Emails that tap into joy, fear, excitement, nostalgia, or empathy cut through the noise because we’re wired to respond to emotional cues.Ā 

Storytelling, vivid language, and emotive subject lines can all spark that feeling. Charities often use this to evoke empathy and urgency. For other industries, it may look like this:Ā 

  • Retail/E-commerce (Excitement) ā€œFeel the thrill of unboxing something new!ā€Ā 
  • Food & Beverage (Pleasure/Comfort) Savor the taste of home, fresh from our kitchen to yours.ā€Ā 
  • Insurance (Fear/Security) ā€œProtect what matters most before it’s too late.ā€Ā Ā 
  • Entertainment (Curiosity/Fun) ā€œThe twist you never saw coming is waiting for you.ā€Ā 
  • SaaS/Productivity (Relief) ā€œFinally, a tool that makes your workday stress-free.ā€Ā 

Self-identification and StorytellingĀ 

Connecting with the audience should be at the heart of every email. To make them care about your message, you need to frame it as a story they can relate to.Ā 

What brands often get wrong is that they position themselves as the hero of that story. In reality, your reader should be the hero of the journey, and your role is to be the guide who helps them succeed.Ā 

self identification and storytelling example for EDM marketing

Image courtesy of reallygoodemails.comĀ 

Instead of ā€œWe built the most advanced platform in the marketā€, you can say ā€œYou get the tools to work smarter and faster every day.ā€ instead. This shift in perspective makes your content more relatable. When you frame your emails this way, you tap into the psychology of self-identification. You highlight their struggle, paint a picture of the success they want, and then show how your product or service helps them get there.Ā 

Social ProofĀ 

In marketing, social proof means leveraging the idea that if many (or influential) people trust or buy something, it must be good.Ā Ā 

Show real stories in EDM Marketing content

Including indicators of popularity or approval in your EDM content can instantly boost credibility. There are many ways to weave social proof into emails:Ā 

  • Testimonials, reviews, and accolades Highlight a short customer testimonial or a stellar product review. Also, featuring a badge or a line about it (ā€œVoted #1 by PC Magazineā€, ā€œAs seen on New York Times) is like saying experts have validated us.Ā 
  • Numbers and Milestones Share impressive stats, like ā€œJoin 50,000+ happy subscribersā€ or ā€œOver 1 million units sold.ā€Ā 
  • ā€œTrendingā€ or ā€œBest Sellersā€ Many retail emails now feature sections like ā€œTrending productsā€ or ā€œOur best sellers,ā€ essentially saying others are buying this, maybe you’d like it too.ā€Ā 

Loss Aversion (urgency)Ā 

Humans hate losing out. In fact, psychologically, the pain of losing something is about twice as powerful as the pleasure of gaining something equivalent. This is known as loss aversion, and it’s a potent tool in email marketing.Ā Ā 

loss aversion urgency example for EDM marketing

Image courtesy of reallygoodemails.comĀ 

The idea is simple: people are motivated to act if they fear they might miss their chance or incur a loss by not acting. You’ve likely seen this used all the time in phrases like ā€œDon’t miss out!ā€ or ā€œOnly 3 left in stock!ā€Ā 

AnchoringĀ 

In marketing, anchoring is often used with pricing or options: the initial number or option sets an expectation that influences how we perceive later numbers or options.Ā 

Anchoring example for EDM marketing

Image courtesy of reallygoodemails.comĀ 

You can use anchoring to frame your offer in the best possible light. The most common practice is price anchoring. If you’re offering a discount, mention the original (higher) price first, then the sale price. For example, an email might say ā€œOriginally $129, now $79 (Save $50).ā€Ā 

For tiered options, you can introduce the most expensive option first, so that the subsequent options seem more reasonable.Ā 

Exclusivity BiasĀ 

Exclusivity bias is the idea that people are more interested in something if they believe it’s not available to everyone. When a product, offer, or content is perceived as limited-access or invite-only, it gains a ā€œshiny appealā€ that regular offerings might lack.Ā 

It doesn’t even have to be offers. Even something as simple as phrasing a survey invite as ā€œYou have been selected to give feedbackā€ (versus a generic ā€œPlease take our surveyā€) can increase participation because it strokes that exclusivity bias.Ā 

Action PsychologyĀ 

At the end of the day, the goal of most EDM content is to get the reader to do something, whether it is to sign up, shop now, download, register, etc.Ā Ā 

action psychology example for EDM marketing

Image courtesy of reallygoodemails.comĀ 

This is where action psychology comes into play. The art and science of designing your content and call-to-action (CTA) in a way that maximises the odds of that click or conversion.Ā  The wording needs to be short, clear, and action-oriented. Strong action verbs like ā€œGet,ā€ ā€œStart,ā€ ā€œDiscover,ā€ or ā€œReserveā€ prompt the reader to act now rather than later.Ā 

EDM Wins with Stories, Not VolumeĀ 

The best EDM campaigns succeed not by flooding inboxes but by using content shaped through psychology and storytelling. When you tug on the reader’s heartstrings, your emails become far more than promotions.Ā 

It’s not about sending more, it’s about making every message matter. By focusing on clarity, relevance, and the psychological cues that guide decisions, each email can feel like a personal conversation. Done right, your emails don’t just get opened, they’ll produce conversions as well.Ā 

For businesses ready to move beyond email blasts, a well-crafted EDM strategy offers a clear edge. If you want expert guidance on writing campaigns that connect and convert, get in touch with us for a content strategy consultation.Ā 

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Omer Bernstein Co-Founder & Head of Marketing and Sales
Omer Bernstein is Co-Founder and Head of Marketing and Sales at Mindesigns, where he leads paid advertising and lead generation for B2B clients across Australia. Over the past decade he has managed campaigns across Google Ads, Meta and LinkedIn, delivering results like reducing GeoNadir's user sign-up cost from $21.50 to $5.30, generating B2B leads for as little as $8 through lead magnet campaigns, and driving SEQOS's LinkedIn and Google leads at an average of $153 per lead. He also leads Mindesigns' integrated media work, connecting billboard, TV and radio spend to measurable search demand and pipeline. Outside the agency, Omer is Co-Director of the Impact10X Venture Builder Program and Founder-in-Residence at James Cook University, where he mentors founders on go-to-market and growth. He is also one of our certified Google ads experts.
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